I have happy family, it is my father, my mother and me.
　　My father is very fat, he is a civil servant, he works very hard.. Father is very funny, put my family very happy. I’m very happy.
　　My mother is very thin, she is civil servant, too. She is a good cooker, she cooks food for everybody. She is quiet, and she likes books and swimming.
　　I’m a little girl in the family, maybe I’ll be a writer. I like hamburger, chips, books, swim 初中历史.
　　This is my happy family!
　　评语：Very good!This is a good speech!今天有了很大的进步，继续努力！只要你用心写，也可以写出很多的，继续加油！要开心一点，心情好了就可以学得更好！

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