高考英语备考 英语写作中出现的成分残缺错误

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英语写作在英语高考中是重中之重,但有的同学在写作时,常常不考虑句子的完整性而写出一些成分残缺的句子,造成写作分数不理想。小编特总结了英语写作中出现的成分残缺错误,希望对广大考生的英语写作有所帮助!

1. 他的笔头英语不错,但口语不行。

误:His written English is good, but not good at spoken English.

正:His written English is good, but his spoken English is not good.

正:He is good at written English, but not good at spoken English.

析:误句中 but 后的句子缺适当的主语,因为 good at spoken English 的主语应是“他”,而不是 his written English。

2. 英语很有趣,我的确很喜欢。

误:English is very interesting, and I really like very much.

正:English is very interesting, and I really like it very much.

析:like 是及物动词,其后通常应有宾语。

3. 别怕,我们会帮你的。

误:Don’t afraid; we’ll help you.

正:Don’t be afraid; we’ll help you.

析:误句谓语不完整,因为 afraid 是形容词,不是动词,不能单独作谓语,必须和连系动词一起构成谓语。当然,若说成 Don’t fear,则完全可以。

4.住在我隔壁的李明是个医生。

误:Li Ming, lives next to me, is a doctor.

正:Li Ming, who lives next to me, is a doctor.

正:Li Ming, living next to me, is a doctor.

析:误句中定语成分不完整。定语从句是一个完整的句子,当先行词指人且关系代词在从句中作主语时要用that或who。也可用现在分词短语作后置定语。

5. 你介意我问你一个问题吗?

误:Do you mind I ask you a question?

正:Do you mind if I ask you a question?

正:Do you mind my asking you a question?

析:误句中的主句和从句之间缺少连接词。也可以用动名词短语作mind的宾语。

6. 他考试及格了使他妈妈很高兴。

误:He passed the exam made his mother very happy.

正:That he passed the exam made his mother very happy.

正:He passed the exam, which made his mother very happy.

析:误句中的主语应该是由主语从句来承担的。that引导主语从句,不做成分,无实际意义,但不能省略。也可以用非限定性定语从句。


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